Tuesday, December 3, 2013

One Minute Remaining. A short writing exercise.

…1 minute remaining…

Miriam felt a drop of sweat roll down her forehead, but she could not reach up and wipe it away. She could not do much of anything with her hands right now seeing as they were both hovering over the innards of a bomb! She only had to look at it to know they could not just let the device detonate. Even getting the thing to the bomb range would have been useless. The thing had to be taken care of, disarmed, here and now. She was face-to-digital timer with a suitcase nuke.

            She considered the guts of the explosive device before her, willing her body to shiver so that her hands did not. It was chilling, the whole thing could fit in an average briefcase, yet it could level this city and lay waste to most of the countryside around it.

…45 seconds…

She needed to be ruthless with herself. She had to maintain absolute control over her every action. She could not let fear drive her. There was plenty of time if she could remain cool. The bomb was powerful, but in its own way it was not complex.  She made her eyes follow the wires, made her mind identify the components of the device, the timer, the switch, the detonator, and the payload. There were very few redundancies or false leads; the device builder was not interested in subtlety or elegance. This was all the better for her.

…30 seconds…

            She took deep, cleansing breaths, rigidly keeping them under her control, ignoring the urge to hyperventilate or even hold her breath, both of which could lead to a black out and that would be a disaster. Slowly she maneuvered her wire-cutters over to the proper leads, the wires her training and solid judgment and experience told her were vital to the operation of the device. She slipped a little, her cutters missing her intended mark. She growled inwardly as she felt the prickly shiver of cold sweat run over her body.  So much was riding on this, on her. She could not afford to make a single mistake.

…15 seconds…

            The cutters were over the right wires. Her eyes wandered the device, checking, double checking. She had to be absolutely sure; there would be no second chance. Not for her, or for anyone else within the next hundred miles or so.

…10 seconds…

            She was certain that she had identified the right wires to cut. She had remained as calm and analytical as anyone in her situation could be. She had only to make the cuts and it would all be over. She thought about all the people whose very lives balanced on this critical moment. She just had to do it.  She told her fingers to squeeze and make the cut, only to discover they would not respond to her commands. She was frozen, trapped in hesitation. If she could not shake this, everyone was doomed.

…5 seconds…

            Cut! She mentally screamed at the fingers that held the wire cutters.

…4 seconds…

            Cut Damn You!

…3 seconds…

            CUT!

…2 seconds…


            She felt her fingers move, she felt the stiff sensation that had flooded her body flee like darkness from a suddenly switched on light. She felt the wire-cutters slice through the plastic insulation and metal wire and out of the plastic insulation again. She glanced at the timer, the screen was blank. She looked at the switch, it remained un-switched.  She had made it. Just in time she had made it. Miriam rose, taking her lucky, ceramic wire cutters with her as she did. She took exactly ten steps away as the other demolitions disposal techs rushed to dismantle, disarm, and transport the separate components of the bomb away. They barely paid her any notice as they battled their own fears and concerns.  As the adrenaline and all the other chemicals and hormones she’d ignored finally wreaked their havoc on her body she fell to her knees and let it happen. She didn’t remember if she cried or shouted or screamed or simply collapsed. She stared at the beautiful cloud-filled sky for a while. She always was a pragmatist however, so she did eventually think that it was going to cost a fortune to get whatever filth was in the asphalt she was lying on out of her black dress and frilly white apron. She also remembered that her hair band was probably also out of skew and she more than likely looked a fright. When the others came to pick her up, she was still lying there, chuckling to herself about it. Some might have called her a hero, but to her it was just another day on the job.